I rewrote a loot of this chapter, mostly the back half, so if you wanna see that, it's posted here.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Igf0hVzRLzcXLK_3jpcZgKOmyiz8aVN2h-OnV49bpqQ/edit?usp=sharing
Born and raised in Centrals Nan Ping, Yo Shi-Woo was undoubtedly biased towards his home province,...
2020-03-23 17:38:15 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1zBs1QLFETVp0FQz0bZv7brnLYwx28ur0mg-LP9O3OKo/edit?usp=sharing
Born and raised in Centrals Nan Ping, Yo Shi-Woo was undoubtedly biased towards his home province, but even he had to admit the Northerners knew how to make an entrance.
Riding at the head of the ten-thousand soldier convoy was the highest ranking officer in the Northern ...
2020-03-23 00:12:18 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1VMN0TVEuA2OriBcmZz5_O3i64xia_1Sw0TDooWU__pQ/edit?usp=sharing
As the days journey came to an end, Song set aside the mysteries of the Martial Path to ponder a matter of grave and immediate concern.
By this time tomorrow, their ten-thousand strong convoy will have arrived at the gates of the Central Citadel, where the true trials and tribula...
2020-03-20 00:04:16 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1txPDlR4uKixjUB5mAHV5rRkASecga_UC3ICrPFKs0qw/edit?usp=sharing
Despite the dire circumstances and calamitous tribulations to come, Du Min Gyu looked forward to meeting this latest challenge head on. A seasoned veteran of hundreds, if not thousands of battles, he well remembered the thrill of combat and rush of victory, and for many decades had sought to...
2020-03-17 23:00:12 +0000 UTC View PostI actually wrote this chapter twice, so for any of you who care to compare, you can find the unedited first draft in the other post here
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xXzxWLCMDzgr60ZJqumWt06iTmrOksh9XZvpI4X3bDQ/edit?usp=sharing
After sitting in a sealed box on wheels for the entire day, I wholeheartedly believe that anyone who cl...
2020-03-15 20:11:02 +0000 UTC View PostTHIS WAS REWRITTEN GO HERE FOR ACTUAL CHAPTER
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UyieKh17QmOmy52CRkRS-3012tKF7nOfklVzjrORdjE/edit?usp=sharing
After four hours of sitting in a closed box on wheels, I can confidently say that anyone who claims to ...
2020-03-13 23:41:47 +0000 UTC View PostLong story short, I got a bad infection from my wisdom tooth removal. Won't go into details, but the antibiotics are a bitch. I'll try to get back ASAP, and will let you know more as soon as I can. No Chapter 563 today, and look to discord for more info when I have it.
Sorry.
2020-03-10 22:59:22 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1QvxkUcMBFhXbCEtAtWH6d8olkCARlO8Z2dLO2iCzcfQ/edit?usp=sharing
Though drained, dishevelled, and disoriented, Luo-Luo couldnt remember a time when shed been so relaxed and carefree.
It wasnt that she had nothing to concern herself with. Quite the contrary, in fact, as shed never been busier, for not only was she upon the cusp of discov...
2020-03-08 20:37:33 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1wuxth0GFF_f1E4Qw6Zs-rjLYah5TQPD9z4ir3k6t0y4/edit?usp=sharing
Mom? Can you hear me?
The words started as a whisper and culminated in a roar which brought Sarnai back to her senses, and she didnt much like what she found. She was thirsty, which she immediately voiced without thinking, and hungry, tired, and uncomfortable to boot. ...
2020-03-06 19:33:06 +0000 UTC View PostI had a whole thing planned and written, then discovered it didn't work as is, so now I gotta rewrite things for a different plan. Won't be done tonight, but hopefully it'll be done by tomorrow evening at the latest. Got a dentist follow up appointment to make sure everything hunky dory in the morning, and then free to write for the rest of the day.
Sorry all, but I'll have the chapter out ASAP
2020-03-05 22:48:15 +0000 UTC View PostSorry for the delay. I'd actually intended to post on sunday, but then the chapter I wrote while sick was so terrible, I had to write it again. Anyways, we back on track, or should be. Got a dental appointment RN, so gonna head off to that for what I think will be good news :D
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CD2UTOk8SBulhtH6cbLtYjWWq4htNep01FYvZocn6fc/edit?usp=sharing
As Marshal of ...
2020-03-04 00:10:32 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1KQUgxU3G6VyPZPNmGiwMDxrJhSncIj8W57KLLcIpvSk/edit?usp=sharing
I am the Undying Savage, Falling Rain. Son of Baatar and Sarnai, Brother of Alsantset and Charok, Uncle to Tali and Tate, Grandson to Akanai and Husolt. Student to Taduk, Betrothed to Sumila, Du Min Yan, and Mei Lin, Consort to Zheng Luo, and unwilling Master to Li Song. I am also a Khishig of the Bekhai b...
2020-03-01 21:05:08 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1sSe_c-uqLrrNZVWXxW74TCVF7lCHU8ITubxEuf7hXRc/edit?usp=sharing
In thirty-nine years of military service, Binesi had seen countless young talents come and go.
Most were a disappointing lot, a bunch of peacocked fops who bought into their lickspittles lies and believed they were destined to become the next Lu An Jing or DuGu Tian Sha. Most lacked the ...
2020-02-28 01:15:14 +0000 UTC View PostHere it be! I know some of you are gonna groan about this, but I'm gonna be real with you. There's a GOOD reason these animals are a big part of the story, and it's not JUST because I really, really, really love them.
Also, originally this was ch 557, but i swapped things around and now it's 556. It shouldn't matter, because the comments below are pertaining to this chapter, but just letting you know :D
Pretty much title. I was 80% done, then decided it was hot trash and scrapped it. New PoV wasn't needed, and I spent too much time on backstory that, let's face it, wasn't relevant. I've already started on a new chapter, but it might have to wait till thursday. Lots of work to do before going on leave for wisdom teeth removal, as in actual work work and just general prep so I don't starve to death on my own, or worse, call my mommy to come save me.
Anywho, I have no idea when I'll start back up after the surgery. I hear some...
2020-02-18 22:55:59 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1PtItbybGHvwTyEjVcb47nSmWt27JV9Tjl2jBc93-H2M/edit?usp=sharing
The path to sweet success often lay atop a foundation of bitter failure.
A lesson Nian Zu learned early in life, and it stuck with him for the rest of his life. Before their falling out, his parents had no high expectations of him with regards to becoming a Martial Warrior. They were all too happy to have him Form his Core and proceed no further along the Martial Path, for they had no other children a...
2020-02-17 00:21:25 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1xKXUO3llc86_CtOIM5329cEZtRpM5ER_HjY0Ij_-flc/edit?usp=sharing
Im not much of a planner.
Most people would think otherwise considering the sheer amount of time I spend lost in my head, but I never really got the hang of plotting and scheming. Its just too complicated. Take chess for example, which is a decent measure of ones strategic ability. A n...
2020-02-14 00:43:31 +0000 UTC View PostStill not eating solid foods, and I need painkillers to sleep, but yea. Here I am back at it again. Writing. Because physical pain isn't enough. I need mental and emotional pain as well.
The tooth extraction was not simple and easy and anyone who said it would be is a dirty stinking liar. I still have another appointment to book, but I'm holding off on it because I'm a giant pansy and can't go through this again so soon. That's all for now, so enjoy the chapter :D
See the Announcement Post for news regarding the upcoming break.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/192sZTgYnf5XX4wsW7l9QvOkE2-cN5i91tX-L9NJk3aM/edit?usp=sharing
Having spent most of this past year getting to know the Bekhai, Du Min Gyu no longer thought of little Yans tribesman as merely a bunch o...
2020-02-10 01:24:52 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1Snj7qizzpADpBhV0MJEJrMOhuLmxzDTF2OiM8EXW5HU/edit?usp=sharing
While its mildly embarrassing to go running to Mom and Dad for help so often, I gotta say its nice to know theyll come riding to the rescue whenever they hear Im in trouble, at the head of a heavily armed contingent, no less.
Despite riding at a breakneck pace, my rescue party ...
2020-02-07 20:29:11 +0000 UTC View PostAppointment got pushed back until the 21st of feb, so that's when I'll go on break instead. For 5$ Patrons, I don't have a chapter yet, but I'm working on in it and will have it out by tomorrow night probably. Sorry, and take care.
2020-02-07 01:00:33 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1wrrFsZNSQ59_0PnzaLoR9AajY-1iWqGFewBB6bGkDo0/edit?usp=sharing
As the assassins blade lances towards my throat, my thoughts are not of panic due to impending death or regret over leaving home unarmed and unarmoured.
Nor am I calm, cool, and collected, using the precious time before impact to formulate a proper, warriors response, beca...
2020-02-04 23:31:31 +0000 UTC View PostThe time is nigh.
As some of you may recall, I've been meaning to get my wisdom teeth removed and now I've finally set the appointment. It's this coming friday, the seventh of february, which is a lot sooner than I expected considering I just booked it today. At first, I was like okay, nbd, I'll just keep writing till thursday and then toodles, but after giving it some thought, I'm gonna start the break today. Not only do I need to mentally prepare and say goodbye to all my loved ones, I also need to clean my apartmen...
2020-02-04 23:31:20 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1tI7E8FzaiQ6zh-7z-celxCuc8tMcr-5jS_LVQdXq3P8/edit?usp=sharing
No matter the occasion, I love sitting down for meals with family and friends, and doubly so when I cooked said meal. Theres something deeply satisfying about providing for my loved ones and seeing them enjoy the fruits of my labour, a fact I was only recently reminded of when Lin-Lin asked me...
2020-02-03 20:57:27 +0000 UTC View PostAfter I walked my dog this afternoon, I decided the chapter would be better if done in a different order. I thought I could amend it properly and finish, but alas, I was wrong.
It might be later tonight, but it'll most likely be tomorrow evening. Sorry to start the month off so poorly.
Also, as an added note, I totally wasn't joking or being tongue in cheek when I suggested readers on RR just wait out the cliff. I appreciate the support, but I feel like i tricked you into it, so if anyone feels jebaited, ple...
2020-02-03 00:56:17 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1WHHEsvX4g9O9m2it10pQKwYddp5YKR8-gQ2MYsWrSQw/edit?usp=sharing
Seated within her Natal Palace, Song basked in the comforting nothingness of the void and listened to Mamas soothing recital of Bamboo in the Rock, a fairly unremarkable piece in the Classics of Poetry.
Upright stands the bamboo amid green mountains steep,
Its...
2020-01-31 00:42:44 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1rVGXhi1BkHkiRS0nIc4ACUqi75fwsxpYDiosNJaZ9-s/edit?usp=sharing
Goodness, Lady Luo-Luo! Are ye all right?
Assailed by the glaring sunlight and irritated by the noise, Luo-Luo squeezed her eyes shut and offered a wordless groan of displeasure. Why was her bed so uncomfortable, with her head pressed against a hard surface and back angled ...
2020-01-29 00:04:24 +0000 UTC View PostSee Announcement post for news
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1woOs533yl3S0B9zVqleNzZMdjfnYKS6QB71961t9IZ0/edit?usp=sharing
I, Falling Rain, am a complete and utter mess.
Its no big secret. Ive been one all my life, but most people probably figured I would eventually get my shit...
2020-01-26 21:35:39 +0000 UTC View Posthttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1OhOWlWhLz3cFqlVHd9MiQa6L82NfWsvn_PKNQBNClhI/edit?usp=sharing
...then the Legate handed me this invitation and told me to go mend my tarnished reputation. Shrugging to share my helpless ignorance, I add, After which I got changed, came straight home, sat down in this chair, told you guys everything that happened, and now were all caught up. 2020-01-24 00:36:13 +0000 UTC View Post
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M1FtzmZzELQwyo6dQqiRKZeHATfDrj0aAl7Mikhv5Q0/edit?usp=sharing
Living through a near-death experience is never pleasant, but it sure as hell beats the alternative.
Or at least thats the theory, but my aching spleen begs to differ. It feels like someone filled my stomach with gasoline and lit it on fire, then set off a claymore mine that...
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